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On Having a character go into a murderous rampage because someone gives him a slice of cake doesn t make sense unless it s explained for example that the government programmed
"THAT PERSON TO GO INTO A "person to go into a rampage if served cake As a reader I want to understand a book I don t want to have to create my own explanations to make a plot or scene work4 When a murderer snaps several years after an event it d be nice to know what set him off5 I like suspense but only if used properly When used properly it s a great addition to a story When not used correctly like when the information being withheld ties in directly to the title of the book and in no way reveals the denouement say for example identical feathers found at crime scenes in a book titled Birds of a Feather it ust makes a story tedious Put another way Not immediately revealing who owned the knife found at the murder scene and not revealing related information that would give away the mystery Good use of suspense Waiting one hundred pages to reveal a knife was the murder weapon and treating it as super mysterious when it doesn t reveal anything and is easy to figure out with the information given Not a good use of suspense6 Love triangles are overused but when used correctly I always forgive the overuse and eagerly lap up the drama However crucifying one character to build a triangle telling the audience why they should like a character without giving any examples as to why and using the device as a way to put in a cheap unnecessary cliffhanger are not acceptable uses of a love triangle and remind me why I d like them to become the exception rather than the rule in storytelling7 Also if an author must have a love triangle in a story it d be nice if the person at the center does not seem like a cold heartless fish As a reader I want to understand why two men are attracted to one woman and both pursue her Telling me that Betsy is a vicarious funny woman doesn t convince me she is especially when the book contains no examples of that and doesn t show me why two men are fighting over her Said conflict is even difficult to believe when the author points out repeatedly that the story is set in post WWI England and available women outnumber men by a considerable degree8 Using feelings to advance a story Nope Sorry Yes I m all about rooms giving off a certain vibe and going off gut instincts but when an author off gut instincts But when an author meditation and mysticism in place of actual investigating I don t like it It seems cheap9 Emotional scenes put in for no reason other than to take up page space and make a character seem deep Nope Don t do it Especially when an
Author Can T Even Let can t even let melodramatic story tell itself excerpts of brief meaningless conversations about a problem suddenly invented are not fun to read and do not move me to any emotion other than annoyance10 If a character is suffering from a drug addiction and withdrawal there needs to be some actual conseuence Having them absolutely fine whenever they are needed Weak I want conseuences Under this logic Achilles still had a weak heel but it didn t matter and he won anyway What s the point of that Those are the major points about why I didn t like this book To boil it all down and I could have put this earlier but certain books ust bring out a need to rant Like the first one this has all of the pieces of a good mystery but the actual product is not good I can t uite believe such a great premise is not only so badly executed but has spanned an as of 2011 eight book series What am I missing That s the real mystery Not recommended Have you ever stayed up late to finish a book not because you re enjoying it but because you want to put yourself out of some misery That s this novel This was a real struggle to finish It s not awful but it shows none of the command of characters plot action really everything that matters. Lf made man who has lavished her with privilege but kept her in a gilded cage His domineering ways have driven her off before and now she’s bolted againWaite’s instructions are to find his daughter and bring her home When Maisie looks into the disappearance she finds a chilling link to Stratton’s murder case and to the terrible legacy of The Great Wa. I really enjoyed this It s a murder mystery set between WWI and WWII in England Maisie is a self employed PI She s been hired by a very wealthy man to find his adult daughter who was single and lived at home Maisie discovers this woman has had several friends who have been murdered Reading this reminded me of watching a Masterpiece Mystery on PBS It has no bloody violence or gore Just a good old fashioned murder mystery I bought this book many years ago and did not realize it is 2 in a series but the author did fill in a bit that is probably in the first book I will definitely keep any eye out for the 3rd book I really grew tired of the plot device whereby the author hid essential information from the reader that Maisie had in order to keep me from figuring out the mystery Maisie sat down with Mr Jones and began to ask the uestions that had been forming since she d met with Mr Smith When she left the office an hour later the pieces were finally starting to fall into place That s ust a paraphrase but it happened over and over We are never privy to her thought processes the identification of items she finds at the the crime scene the reasoning for her hunch that so and so is lying etc But instead of having that all tumble in at the end deus ex machina style which I don t like either we get teased throughout the book Maisie s hand closed around something small under the cushion but she slipped it uickly into her handkerchief I guess the mystery couldn t hold up to the reader s scrutiny ust as in the first book if I d learned of the clues at the same time as Maisie I could have solved the mystery probably a third of the way through While I enjoyed the first in this series this second book has me wondering if I really want to continue reading about Maisie "Dobbs The mysticismwoo used by Maisie to sense things is really becoming wearing and unnecessary if Maisie is " The mysticismwoo used by Maisie to sense things is really becoming wearing and unnecessary if Maisie is to be so bright intuitive and observing of her surroundings this extra centering and feeling the hand of a dead person on her shoulder is arring and silly There are also subplots with Maisi Reading a Maisie Dobbs book is like eating comfort food There are such good supporting roles Maurice Blanche Lady Rowan her father Billy and are being added It s nice facing life s challenges with such a crew bouying you up I imagine Reading this story helped me reflect on my own supporters We are such a result of those whom we love and associate with even those from whom we seem naturally repelled Each day we re torn down in new ways built up in others morphing into better creatures we hopeI had to chuckle at the book s plug for Pilates Yes it takes a novel to convince me to finally give it another try We are taught in our own language aren t we Mine seems to be books than anything So to the library Pilates collection I say Here I comeWinspear adds such beef to my understanding of wartime and its effects I really loved Lady Rowan s remark about how war isn t really over when it ends but continues on in the living So true I m glad she said in the living So true I m glad she said so much better I was a bit disappointed with this seuel to the introductory Maisie Dobbs novel It s a good cosy mystery but not great Maisie is finding her feet as a fledgling private detective in post WWI London and the author seems to be doing the same with this series Maisie is an interesting character as an independent woman in the 1920s but she is seemingly without flaws and human weaknesses and always perfectly groomed and turned out There is also an element of psychic powers creeping in where Maisie closes her eyes and senses what happened before in the room used as a device to move the plot on which I found not very believable The story involves a missing heiress Charlotte Waite who has run away from home When Maisie discovers that three of Charlotte s closest friends have died she must discover what. An eventful year has passed for Maisie Dobbs Since starting a one woman private investigation agency in 1929 London she now has a professional office in Fitzroy Suare and an assistant the happy go lucky Billy Beale She has proven herself as a psychologist and investigator and has even won over Detective Inspector Stratton of Scotland Yard’s Murder Suad Happened in the past to lead to these deaths and send Charlotte
INTO HIDING OVERALL A SOLID BUThiding Overall a solid but slow cosy mystery The series is highly rated so I ll continue with it in the hope of improved plots and character development I read this aloud towith a friend who has cancer We d read book one and moved on to book two This series is delightful and cleverIt takes us a long time to get through these books but we both love them They re so much fun Great humor Great pathos Great psychological insight Absolutely wonderful lovable captivating and memorable characters and interesting relationships Good mysteries too This series reminds me a bit of the Ruth Galloway series by Elly Griffiths and that is high praise I do appreciate how all of the recurring characters are basically good and that even the villains are humanized and shown sympathetically Read 20200525 20200704 The author does a good enough Eduquer un Jack Russell: L'éducation de ton chiot Jack Russell job with her characters that it was rare I got confused despite taking so long to read this book It s an enjoyable read aloud book I know I would like it anyway but it s even entertaining to read it aloudread it with someone else Very sweet acknowledgments page at the end of the book where her dog and her cat are mentioned Read a borrowed e copy from my public library due to the pandemic 4 12 stars I m giving up on this series I want to like it but Iust don t I d like reasons behind her solving cases instead of mystic hunches The set up is great The character not at allAlso this book particularly annoyed me Throughout the author kept pointing out how little Maisie ate All these comments about how she d forgotten to eat breakfast or how she peeled the batter off her fish I started wondering if the author wrote this while dieting since it added nothing to the character or the story the 2nd in a series always a test to see how well the characters hold up and I thought these did actually liked this book better than the first one the characters were developed maybe seemed a bit real not that I was looking for that but it struck me as a good thing when I was reading and there seemed to be of a real mystery this time themes about WWI and loss and I love that Maisie might be ready for a new relationship I ll definitely read of the series I so want to like this series I feel like I should like this series that I m the target audience and there is something wrong with me that I don t like this series But I don t like Maisie Dobbs At all She s a cold self centered woman with few redeeming ualities and the good fortune to be fictional and therefore able to ignore her numerous failings due to an author *who wants to make her something wonderful In short she s the literary euivalent of a *wants to make her something wonderful In short she s the literary euivalent of a lazy not at all bright teenager who gets into Harvard because of a legacy After finishing this book I made a list of what I didn t like about this book don t worry it s not exhaustive so that whenever I start to think I should give this series another chance I can read this list and remember why that would be a waste of good reading What follows contains some small spoilers but since I don t think the book is worth reading I don t feel particularly bad about possibly ruining this book seriously don t read it1 I don t care how many times an author tells me a character is smart That doesn t convince me Show me a character is smart I can say I m 6 1 all I want but that doesn t make me 6 1 2 On a related note when a character is supposed to be smart don t drop massive clues have said character ignore said clues for one hundred pages and then suddenly remember them when it s convenient for the story That makes the character looks stupid3 When an convenient for the story That makes the character looks stupid3 When an bases a scene or resolution off what one character says or does please make sure said action would make a normal person step back and go yep understand why that would evoke that reacti. N admirable achievement for a woman who worked her way from servant to scholar to sleuth and who also served as a battlefield nurse in the Great WarIt’s now the early Spring of 1930 Stratton is investigating a murder case in Coulsden while Maisie has been summoned to Dulwich to find a runaway heiress The woman is the daughter of Joseph Waite a wealthy se.